Walter
Animated short by Lorenzo Fresta (CalArts, 2019) · no dialogue
A lonely toad bikes across the desert to water his plant. Fresta — now a story artist at Pixar — made a film with no dialogue at all, so the score is the narration: exhaustion, the plant dying, the wind, the bloom, and the flight. I connected the wind motif to the blooming of the plant and accented each bloom with xylophone, then deliberately pulled the music away for the ending — a choice the juror pushed back on.
"You connect the wind with the blooming of the plant which is VERY well done. [...] It is clear you have compositional skills and a good sensibility for working with picture."— IFMC juror, Walter notes
Full juror notes — Walter
"There are some great rich moments in this score that are really well done. I feel there was a lot of work put into the first half of this scene and I would have liked for the same approach in the ending. Nice opening, and I love how the first chord is on the plant. The music is very melancholy which works really well with Walter's concern and exhaustion. The music as the plant dies is subtle but so sad! Really touching. I love it. The synth touch over the strings is well done. I love how the progression starts again on the wind battering the window and then moves to the bloom. You connect the wind with the blooming of the plant which is VERY well done. I love the string movement as the plant blooms the seedball. I love how you start a musical idea that really feels like it comes into focus as we get that beautiful ceiling shot of all the seedballs. Great connection to picture. Also appreciate how the xylophone accents plants blooming."
"I like the reducing of musical activity as they surround Walter. I feel like this is a funny moment though, and the humour could have been highlighted a little better, but the pause works well. The music starting back up as they follow him and he goes to open the window works so well. The whole progression to the lighthouse bursting and then through everything flying out is very powerful and the composition and orchestration matches the picture very well. Very satisfying to watch! The string sustain and harp as he is suspended in the sky and realises that he is OK and all is well, that works really well with picture. I love that we have then have the moving idea in the strings."
"However, as he gets control and takes off over the town and we have that swoop in motion, the music is fading out. I don't really understand this choice. I know it is deliberate and intentional, but for me it doesn't work to picture at all. He is clearly enjoying flying and feels free and accomplished but the music isn't supporting that moment. The glockenspiel and single string at the end I know is an intentional choice, but again for me it doesn't work. There has been so many rich musical moments and I feel this warrants the same treatment. There is some really great music in here. I am disappointed in the ending, but it is clear you have compositional skills and a good sensibility for working with picture. Keep composing."